I thought it all sucked.
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I've been digging through my old posts for some of my more creative gems to put in my writing portfolio for a Writing Community aimed at helping writers to get published... I got quite a few but if any of you recall a post you thought was good or poetic I'd appreciate the help....SHAKA
Coarse edged youth, the irish pendants string from their smiles
not yet plucked as to slacken the seams
and drag down the features of age,
no folds or creases from unkempt wear
eyes of tranquilty, crystalline-beads
no sign of despair in their hair, nor their hearts
but oh they have yet to be experienced and that makes aging so very worth it...ML circa2012


I thought it all sucked.
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Let's all get together with our laptops, some soda, cake(with sprinkles!) and have a sleepover at maniclion's mom's trailer park!!!![]()
SWEET BUDDY!!!
We can use the folding chairs in the living room to make TENTS!!!! After the Treasure Hunt we can all tend our farms on FarmVille!!!


Coarse edged youth, the irish pendants string from their smiles
not yet plucked as to slacken the seams
and drag down the features of age,
no folds or creases from unkempt wear
eyes of tranquilty, crystalline-beads
no sign of despair in their hair, nor their hearts
but oh they have yet to be experienced and that makes aging so very worth it...ML circa2012


i had to find the buried treasure so many grams i had too measure
If you strike me down(ban me)I'll become more powerful than ever.. Don't say i don't warn you.


Coarse edged youth, the irish pendants string from their smiles
not yet plucked as to slacken the seams
and drag down the features of age,
no folds or creases from unkempt wear
eyes of tranquilty, crystalline-beads
no sign of despair in their hair, nor their hearts
but oh they have yet to be experienced and that makes aging so very worth it...ML circa2012


Coarse edged youth, the irish pendants string from their smiles
not yet plucked as to slacken the seams
and drag down the features of age,
no folds or creases from unkempt wear
eyes of tranquilty, crystalline-beads
no sign of despair in their hair, nor their hearts
but oh they have yet to be experienced and that makes aging so very worth it...ML circa2012