alright Fire, think of this as an old fashioned poem battle, tell me what you think

**gr81** · 09-08-2003, 11:10 PM

For Fire
Since everyone was writing poems about bodybuilding, I figured I would drop some shit for ya. It may be more of a rap than a traditional poem, but they are one in the same anyways so peep this,

Soldier

I'm a soldier without tha war paint n attire, strive past tired, 'n stay wired, satisfaction's a must so I make my way higher;
desire's higher than yours and thats evident, I'm reppin, check the sweat from my pores, and steppin more towards, a lesson learnt, no guessin no more, I do my best till death, and the rest ain't so hard;
it'll come cause under tha squat rack I'm an animal then, the battle is in him they say and catabolism is slim, like a bottle of 'slin, powerful hormones mixed with the will to win,
I'm feeling it then, and the end ain't my will to contend, but moreso the journey along,
My focus is strong and never fragile, on this bodybuilding odessy you must be adgile, only trust the man in the mirror, the rest can act vile, and honesty and patience are more important than any weight pile thats piled on,
and all the while strong, and the miles long,
but without it all the pride is gone;
I am driven by the feel of the grip of steel, I rip, I feel if I trip, I'm real, but never slip so I can't appeal;
I'm right back even more intense at a lift, I sense its a gift, livin life for the high that I get when the endorphins rush, my face red like a blush, the sense of my touch of the bar makes sense, theres never a rush;
and the ferociousness brings a calmness, a peace to my world, my feats shared by many the elite who always dare to be bold;
so as the years pass and I get older, behold here, when it comes to this iron game I'm a motha fuckin soldier.
_gr81

**oaktownboy** · 09-08-2003, 11:13 PM

i think i am going to print this out and post in my dorm room for inspiration thanks tons A

**Burner02** · 09-09-2003, 04:53 AM

hooah!
good one, Gr8-

**gr81** · 09-10-2003, 09:41 PM

bump for fire...

**scullz** · 09-11-2003, 07:23 PM

I'm gonna get in on this but It'll take a sec to compete with G 1

**firestorm** · 09-14-2003, 01:05 AM

YO GR8 THAT WAS FUQING AWESOME MY BROTHER. FUQING AWESOME! HANG ON LET ME PUT MY D#$K BACK IN MY PANTS. JUST HIT THE "PRINT" KEY ON THAT ONE.

**gr81** · 09-15-2003, 07:40 PM

Originally posted by firestorm
YO GR8 THAT WAS FUQING AWESOME MY BROTHER. FUQING AWESOME! HANG ON LET ME PUT MY D#$K BACK IN MY PANTS. JUST HIT THE "PRINT" KEY ON THAT ONE.

I'll appreciate you not to take you D#$k

out of your pants while reading my posts, thank you!

I find it offensive you, you god damn...........n/m
HA HA, glad you like my friend, you inspired me to drop that, hey there is more brilliance where that came from ya know.

how was your weekend brotha?

**firestorm** · 09-15-2003, 08:33 PM

Weekend was pretty good. HOw about yours Gman?

**gr81** · 09-15-2003, 08:38 PM

a dissapointment, my friends and I were going to mob up to vancouver for the weekend just for kicks, my best friend isn't 21 yet so yta knoow, but that fell through b/c of our finances, damnit. Now scholl starts for me on the 22nd and the summer is over, oh well I am excited for school start again, ready to hit it hard. We went to a titty bar up here to make up for it, haha

**Burner02** · 09-15-2003, 08:43 PM

what made your weekend so good, bro-
do share!

**firestorm** · 09-15-2003, 09:21 PM

I woke up monday. nuff said. I"m still alive and that makes it all good. Seriously, spent time with the kids and worked out. I'm getting back in my groove and happy about it.

**Burner02** · 09-15-2003, 09:30 PM

shoulder not bugging you then?
is 6 Flags still open

**firestorm** · 09-15-2003, 09:38 PM

Shoulder is "ok". It does ache from doing certain things but I can deal with that. Before I couldn't even do those certain excercises at all. Now I can do them and only suffer some aches afterwards. PUllups for example were impossible, not even one. Now at least I can do my bodyweight for 6 to 8. I'm not pushing them along to quickly. The reps and added weight will come. I don't want to risk re-injuring it.

**Burner02** · 09-15-2003, 09:41 PM

smart move, bro-
I had a shitty day in the gyum today. Really annoying..I was having troulbe moving weight that should have been easy for me...
I know..somedays are good , others aren't..but this should have been easy weight!

**firestorm** · 09-15-2003, 09:44 PM

Trust me,, let it go for now. Remember it only on the day you go back to the gym to do that bodypart. REmember it then and get mad, get explosive and kick your ass. Yeaaa baby now I"m talking.

**Burner02** · 09-15-2003, 09:53 PM

I was talking w/ a friend fomr the gym. (forget his name..Ihave a big mouth..go figure) and know a lot of the guys in there.
He was spotting me. I tld him what I had bor breaky and his possible thought was that I had to complex of carb beore I went to the gym and that my stomach was still digesting it..
who knows..

But yea, I know what you mean..shrug it off and press on..

**firestorm** · 09-15-2003, 09:57 PM

Yep, you'll end up coming back stronger then your last good workout. Sometimes the body just needs that extra break so you tell it to train and it tells you to fuq off.

**gr81** · 09-15-2003, 09:57 PM

whore up MY thread will you, we will see what happens next time either of you have a thread, muuhhhaahahaa.
everybody has bad days B, without the bad ones how would we know when we are having a good one right! its all good man

**firestorm** · 09-15-2003, 10:02 PM

yo Bman,, Can you feel what Gman just said? WORD!

**Burner02** · 09-15-2003, 10:05 PM

straight up!
that's the thing tho..I did take time off..Iidn't get my chest w/out in last week...gawd, it was just sucky!

c'mon, gr8..yo know..no thread is safe..besides..this isn't just drivel..tis is me whinng that I am only moving 'girlie weight'...

**gr81** · 09-15-2003, 10:14 PM

Originally posted by firestorm
yo Bman,, Can you feel what Gman just said? WORD!

R U mockin me, how dare you

ya know I love teh whoring who am I kidding, I feel ya B

**firestorm** · 09-15-2003, 10:21 PM

hahaha no not mocking you just trying to fit in. Talking like dat makes me feel young. lol

**Burner02** · 09-15-2003, 10:22 PM

Originally posted by gr81
R U mockin me,

what's that saying?
the worse I treat you, the better I like you?

**Burner02** · 09-15-2003, 10:23 PM

Originally posted by firestorm
hahaha no not mocking you just trying to fit in. Talking like dat makes me feel young. lol

now..just walkaround with your spandex around your ass and turn your hat sideways, you'll be good to go!

**firestorm** · 09-15-2003, 10:25 PM

very funny biotch!!

**Burner02** · 09-15-2003, 10:32 PM

just tryig to help you fit in!
I get called names for helping out a senior citizen relive his youth..
the thanks I get..

**firestorm** · 09-15-2003, 10:34 PM

ok I'm upgrading your status to Muther F#$ker!!

**Burner02** · 09-15-2003, 10:35 PM

Dave calls it a fluqqer..don't ask me why.
Well, it's dave...he lives in Miami..that might explain some of it..

**gr81** · 09-15-2003, 10:43 PM

Originally posted by firestorm
hahaha no not mocking you just trying to fit in. Talking like dat makes me feel young. lol

Cmon dawgg, just keep it old school, thats why we like you anywayz

**Burner02** · 09-15-2003, 10:44 PM

yeah, you know, use your familiar words:
daddio, groovy, far out....

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