Thread: First scenes of a fictional cop tv show

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(cut to scene in a forensics lab)

Hot Female Lab Attendant

Here is the sperm sample of the victim's assailant, I think you'll be surprised with this. Look. (she places sperm tray under microscope, she gets some on her hand and wipes it off on her lab coat)

The head lab technician (who has a big beard) gives the girl a frustrated and worried look (obviously been up all night drinking coffee and working on the case), then continues to peer into the microscope.

After a few moments the bearded technician slowly raises his head from the microscope and lets out a big sigh. He looks to the girl and says...

that is the lowest sperm count i've ever seen, where did you say you got this sample from?

Head tech: It's from the victims rape kit.
girl: *look at spectrometer results* .. well there's traces of sidenafil citrate as well as xylitol and glycerin.
Head tech: Viagra and personal lubricant!

--- cut to detectives reviewing forensic data ---
Old cop: Looks like out victim had sex with multiple males before he was killed.
Young cop: Looks like we have a homo-cide on our hands *grin*
Old cop: *rolleyes*

Originally Posted by BulkMeUp

Head tech: It's from the victims rape kit.
girl: *look at spectrometer results* .. well there's traces of sidenafil citrate as well as xylitol and glycerin.
Head tech: Viagra and personal lubricant!

--- cut to detectives reviewing forensic data ---
Old cop: Looks like out victim had sex with multiple males before he was killed.
Young cop: Looks like we have a homo-cide on our hands *grin*
Old cop: *rolleyes*

young cop: I wish you would roll your eyes like that when you gave me a blowjob, boss.
old cop: sure
(After gay sex, everyone is dead, old cop, young cop and all the lab tech people are dead.)
(new cop arrives in the city to solve the murders)

Originally Posted by Vieope

young cop: I wish you would roll your eyes like that when you gave me a blowjob, boss.
old cop: sure
(After gay sex, everyone is dead, old cop, young cop and all the lab tech people are dead.)
(new cop arrives in the city to solve the murders)

this took a disturbing turn of events and I think the show might be canceled.

A black guy did it!
lol

The new cop is Salamander Newton. he's a slimeball but a good cop.

He takes a look at the 3-d video reconstruction of the crime scene, he licks his palm and slicks back his hair with one smooth stroke and then bends in for a closer look.(note to self:have Special Effects highlight the circled area with a plasma like glow, you know like from Ghostbusters) There's a glimmering object that appears to have been partially buried during a struggle....

Originally Posted by Vieope

young cop: I wish you would roll your eyes like that when you gave me a blowjob, boss.
old cop: sure
(After gay sex, everyone is dead, old cop, young cop and all the lab tech people are dead.)
(new cop arrives in the city to solve the murders)

Hey...umm...I got a number of aaa...umm...someone you could talk to..you...you know, someone who can umm,, make you feel better...A psychiatrist...

Originally Posted by maniclion

The new cop is Salamander Newton. he's a slimeball but a good cop.

He takes a look at the 3-d video reconstruction of the crime scene, he licks his palm and slicks back his hair with one smooth stroke and then bends in for a closer look.(note to self:have Special Effects highlight the circled area with a plasma like glow, you know like from Ghostbusters) There's a glimmering object that appears to have been partially buried during a struggle....

..he retrieves a silver bracelet with a broken charm. Half the charm attached to the bracelet, the other half missing.

Thinks to himself: whoever committed all these crimes may be in possession of the other broken half..

--- cut to lab scene ---
New Head tech: More dead guys?!
female Assistant: ya, It's raining men *giggle* .. and they are just the way i like them .. Dead!
Head tech: You need to get out more, seriously.

---cut of salamander's bosses office --
Salamander: chief, all the victims had high levels of GHB in their system.. The forensic report suggests they were killed and then posed like they had sex.
Chief: do we have a copy cat on our hands?
salamander: I dont think so. The first victim was an act of rage. But the rest dont seem to be that way.
Chief: didnt the first victim have a wife or Girlfriend?
Salamander: He had a girlfriend. She said she was home alone watching TV waiting for him to get home.
Chief: Talk to her again. See if she knew anything of her boyfriends ... um .. extra curricular activities..
Salamander leaves the Chief's office to interview the Girlfriend.


--cut to girlfriends house --
Salamander: Ma'am I have a few more questions for you..
GF: did you catch the killer? or at least you have a suspect?
Sal: not yet but we do have out suspicions. What time did you expect your BF to come home?
GF: Oh.. probably around 7pm or so.. in time for dinner..
sal: seems like you two were pretty close.
gf: we were I expected to get married next year
sal: Sorry, i didnt mean to upset you.
gf: thats ok *sniff*
sal: May i have a glass of water?
gf:sure *goes into kitchen*

Sal walks across the room leans over to the computer. Quickly looks into the browser history. He sees a page describing the use of GHB and mumbles to self 'I knew it'. As he straightened up and looks out the window he sees the gf in the reflection behind him. Sal spins around.

Sal: You did it! You killed your bf as you found out want he was secretly doing and then killed the rest as a cover up as they were onto you.
GF: *surprised look* I did nothing of the sort! How dare you come in here and accuse me!!! I'm in pain over my loss!!
Sal: Where is the bracelet you are wearing in this photo? *points to a photo on the wall*
gf: *serious face* well, you'll just have to get a warrant to find out.
sal: I'll be back with one as well as to arrest you.
gf: I comitted no crime and you have no proof, now GET OUT!!

*On the way back to the station in Salamanders BMW 135i*
He's racing at top speed to get the warrant, on the way he dials up an old friend....

Sal: Lin Vladrots, it's Newt...I need some recon on a sus, female lives at 799 Monahan Lane, name is Sheila Vickson. I need GPS tracking on her cell number is 777-890-2249, also need immediate data retrieval from her home PC, IP is....hold on.....123.456.789.255 got it.....I'm obting a war right now get on it...

*as soon as he hangs up a black SUV slams him from the side....*
It appears that someone wants him dead, this case goes deeper than anyone knows....

-----Commercial break containing a Public Service Announcement on the evils of clubbing baby harp seals-------

Cut to the pastry show commercial
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Meanwhile the protagonist of the next show after the cop show is angry.
His name is Butterdarkly. He makes pastry. It was the pastry show the biggest tv show on that channel unitl that cop show started. That god damn cop show with Salamander.

Butterdarkly thinks to himself.. "how can I end this cop show? Oh my god, how can I end it?"
Butterdarkly is cooking something is his brain. Cooking nicely, cooking it with pleasure.
He will be born in to the Salamander Adventures. He will possess the body of someone and kill everyone on that show. But who did Butterdarkly possess? Was it the man who owned the bracelet shop?

Originally Posted by Vieope

Cut to the pastry show commercial
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Meanwhile the protagonist of the next show after the cop show is angry.
His name is Butterdarkly. He makes pastry. It was the pastry show the biggest tv show on that channel unitl that cop show started. That god damn cop show with Salamander.

Butterdarkly thinks to himself.. "how can I end this cop show? Oh my god, how can I end it?"
Butterdarkly is cooking something is his brain. Cooking nicely, cooking it with pleasure.
He will be born in to the Salamander Adventures. He will possess the body of someone and kill everyone on that show. But who did Butterdarkly possess? Was it the man who owned the bracelet shop?

Or was it the African man who sold Ostrich Feather Duster's to tourist in the evenings down on Market Octagon, the one who refused to wash his genitals because he thought it would dilute his pheromones and kill his chances to win over ladies with the pungent power of the dark butter churning under his balls with each stirring gait of his strut?

Now Butterdarkly isn't your ordinary pastry chef, he likes to use exotic ingredients in his works of culinary art... And Nancy Drew had grown suspicious of this having known his now possessed alter ego in another time... She had made the connection his name and the time she had been seduced by the aroma of the dark mans nut butter.....But this was all speculative, how was she going to prove it? How could she connect the use of exotic psychotropics to the knowledge of the African's former life as a Nganga....

Meanwhile, at the scene of the accident Salamander Newton(show matrix like slow mo of class shattering and Sal being tossed around in the car like a set of dice in cupped hands, then show his fuzzy dice fly from the mirror and land in the street with 2 and 5 coming up....

Originally Posted by Vieope

Cut to the pastry show commercial
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Meanwhile the protagonist of the next show after the cop show is angry.
His name is Butterdarkly. He makes pastry. It was the pastry show the biggest tv show on that channel unitl that cop show started. That god damn cop show with Salamander.

Butterdarkly thinks to himself.. "how can I end this cop show? Oh my god, how can I end it?"
Butterdarkly is cooking something is his brain. Cooking nicely, cooking it with pleasure.
He will be born in to the Salamander Adventures. He will possess the body of someone and kill everyone on that show. But who did Butterdarkly possess? Was it the man who owned the bracelet shop?

no more drugs for you. or manic for that matter.

Originally Posted by bio-chem

no more drugs for you. or manic for that matter.

the drugs keep my typorrhea in check....

Butterdarkly went home in a very bad mood. Opened a beer and put on a DVD of his favorite show 'Dexter'. The scenes of gore and blood brought a smile to his face. He muttered to himself 'there must be a foolproof way of getting rid of the detective'.

--- cut to the bracelet shop --
Phone rings. The owner answers it.
Owner: The bracelet shop. How may i help you?
Voice on the phone: we need to meet now..

--- cut to commercial---

Originally Posted by maniclion

the drugs keep my typorrhea in check....

please re-read your last couple posts in this thread.

what exactly was kept in check?

Originally Posted by bio-chem

please re-read your last couple posts in this thread.

what exactly was kept in check?

I didn't try to finish the entire story in a Tolstoy like manner, I just tried to make it fun and interesting with some twists....

Originally Posted by maniclion

I didn't try to finish the entire story in a Tolstoy like manner, I just tried to make it fun and interesting with some twists....

point taken. carry on then

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