Please critique my shoulder workout

[mrmark]

This is my shoulder workout with 1 min rest between sets with a target of hypertrophy

1: Military Press - 4 sets
aim for 10 reps but usually by last set get ~8

2: Lateral/Medial dumbell raise - 4 sets
aim for 10 reps but do drop sets to make sure I get 10 reps

3: reverse flys - 4 sets
aim for 10 reps

I was told to do upright row but it doesn't feel comfortable on my shoulders. Is the routine ok or should I add something else into it?

Thanks!!!

 

[Witchblade]

Shoulder workouts suck. Done.

 

[mrmark]

Shoulder workouts suck. Done.

No it's not done. Please, does anyone have any helpful/constructive answers?

Thanks

 

[YSK]

Hmm...my only critique is that is quite a lot for just shoulders. Better wait until someone more credible answers.

 

[Doublebase]

Hmm...my only critique is that is quite a lot for just shoulders. Better wait until someone more credible answers.

Its hard to critique without knowing the rest of your routine. It looks like a lot of volume to me.

 

[mrmark]

Its hard to critique without knowing the rest of your routine. It looks like a lot of volume to me.

Volume will be noted and Ill knock it down a notch. I'll try and look at the whole routine.

thanks for the input